Ich brauch ein ENGLISCHEN grammatik Überprüfer

    Ich muss in die Englisch Prüfung und dafür brauche ich 4 Dialoge, die ich lernen muss. Ich will nur die Überprüfung derGrammatik, BITTE.
    I was in France...
    the old people have problems...
    the language has advantages...
    We can understand modern music...
    I hear in the bus, when I go to school and when I go back home...
    she was born...
    she goes marry in...
    She want to learn German, but she is thinking English ist the best language on the world...
    So das ist erstmal ein Teil von den Sachen derer ich unsicher bin. HILFE[/list][/code][/quote]

    I hear in the bus....
    Was hörst du???

    She want to learn...
    She wants to learn (he, she, it, ein "s" muss mit) :D

    Ansonsten lässt sich Grammatik schwer überprüfen, wenn man keinen Kontext dazu hat.
    Heißt: Zeig mal den ganzen Text

    gruß,
    jojo


    best language worldwide
    she is going to marry on .. (sie hat vor, am .. zu heiraten)
    she is going to marry at (sie hat vor, in ... zu heiraten)

    Zitat von Natcho

    I hear music in the bus...
    thank you...

    Du meinst warscheinlich eher : I listen to music on the bus...

    Aber wie schon zuvor bemerkt es ist schwer so kleine schnippsel auf grammatikalische Fehler zu untersuchen. Schreib gleich die Sätze damit wir wissen um was überhaupt geht.

    hallo könnte iwer gucken ob das so richtig ist?!

    The Xhosa are South African people who belongs linguistically to the Bantu.
    Today the main settlement area of the Xhosa is in the province of Eastern cape. Their language they also call isiXhosa, belongs to one of Eleven Amtssprachen in the South African republic.
    Nine million people speak this language, among them also Nelson Mandela and is after Zulu 2. most frequent mother language. The Xhosa named themselves probably after a headman from the history. It will belong distinguished whether the single groups to the real Xhosas are another sub-groups, e.g., the Bomvana, Bhaca, Thembu or to the Hlubi. About
    three millions Xhosa are mostly national follower of the ANC (African
    Congress) and put with it today a large part of the political guidance
    Of South Africa.

    Traditions, e.g.:

    Birth: To honour of the child an animal is killed after the birth who leads for the desegregation of the spiritual and physically world of the child. The children mostly receive the given name of the father. The names often deal what with e.g. joy or fertility.

    Wedding: To the wedding the woman accepts the name from the man, but she must continue the name of the clan. Before her name the syllable ma is suspended, in addition.

    Death: The Xhosa have the faith this the soul is divine and after the death again back, to the world goes where she has originated. They bury the deads and can go they there for everybody zeit visit.

    Crossing of the child to the man:
    The boys between 16 and 18 years are sent in so-called initiation school where they learn to take over, e.g., responsibility. They live in self-built huts and müüsen often also on food and drinking renounce. The climax of the ritual is the curtailment where they may not shout, only then they are accepted as right Xhosa men. The foreskin must be buried at the next night to conclude with the childhood. Receive becomes the man then from singing, whistling women dancing in the circle.
    The Xhosa-women carry orange clothes have a typical facial painting. In the end Xhosamann must spend another two taciturn days in his room, only then the ceremony is concluded.

    The Xhosa believe only in a God uThixo calls. Xhosa one does not find especially often in that sews from the water except to the fishing. They believe the water is from being does not inhabit anybody in the water to let. Nowadays carry unmarried Xhosa-women mostly only one rock with black bars. The breasts remain unconcealed one. Only verheiratere women carry suitable pearl jewellery in the breasts to the skirts.

    Bitte keine alten Threads reanimieren!!! das nächste mal aufs datum achten...

    The Xhosa are South African people_ (Komma fehlt) who belongs linguistically to the Bantu.
    Today the main settlement area of the Xhosa is (in) (?) the province of Eastern cape. Their language_ (Komma fehlt) they also call isiXhosa, belongs to (is) one of Eleven Amtssprachen in the South African republic.
    Nine million people speak this language, among them also Nelson Mandela and is after Zulu 2. most frequent mother language (Satzbau). The Xhosa named themselves probably after a headman from the history. It will belong distinguished whether the single groups to the real Xhosas are another sub-groups, e.g., the Bomvana, Bhaca, Thembu or to the Hlubi. About
    three millions Xhosa are mostly national follower of the ANC (African
    Congress) and put with it today a large part of the political guidance
    Of South Africa.


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