Grammatik Fehler?

    Ich muss auch in die Englischprüfung mit einem Dialog. Kann mal jemand nach Grammatik- Fehlern schaun, bitte?

    N: What did you seen yesterday?
    S: A Film with Nicolas Cage.
    N : And you Jacky?
    J: I`ve seen sneakhead.
    S: Nancy, what did you seen?
    N: I`ve seen a film with Jean Reno.
    S: Jean Reno is the actor of my favorite Film.
    FILMREPORT...
    Jacky : My favorite film has a sad end, too.
    S: What is the film about?
    N: Wich is your film?
    J: FILMREPORT…
    S:And your favorite film?
    N: FILMREPORT...
    S: I have all films on DVD.
    J: I like it more to go in the cinema.
    N : You can buy cinema-tickets by telephone.
    S : You can call the radiostation, too.
    N: I don`t like radio.
    J: Whats your favorite channel ?
    S: I like Fritz but only when I drive by car.
    J : I hear a lot of Jump. Real I like radio but there a disadvantages, too. For example... hm...
    N : sometimes you have no recive.
    J : A advantage is you can take it everywhere.
    N : I dont hear radio but i watch TV.
    S : Whats your favorite channel?
    N : every Thusday at 8,15 pm I watch « Germanys next Topmodel » Have you a favorite channel ?
    J : I watch every Friday at 3,00 pm « Laguna Beach » on MTV.
    S : On Monday I watch... On Thuseday I watch... Stefan Raab has introduced a book. Jacky do you read books ?
    J : the book I read at last was the biography from Kelly Trump. She speaks in the book about her childehood and her job. It was the most interisting book I ever read:
    N: I dont often read books. I dont like it.
    S: You are wrong. I like books and I have some favorite writers.
    J : What are the names of the writer ?
    S: At first XXX and XXX. The bothe write lovestorys from the real life. The name of the last book I have read has the titel XXX.
    N: the last book I read has the Tiltel SHIT. There are young persons who take drugs, but I read often magazines.
    S: and I read the newspaper often:

    N: What did you watch yesterday?
    S: A movie with Nicolas Cage.
    N : And you, Jacky?
    J: I`ve watched Sneakhead.
    S: Nancy, what did you watch?
    N: I`ve watched a film with Jean Reno.
    S: Jean Reno is the actor of my favorite movie.
    FILMREPORT...
    Jacky : My favorite film has a tragic ending, too.
    S: What is the film about?
    N: Which is your film?
    J: FILMREPORT…
    S:And your favorite film?
    N: FILMREPORT...
    S: I have all movies on DVD.
    J: I prefer to go to cinema.
    Zusammenhang?
    N : You can buy cinema tickets by telephone.
    S : You can call the radiostation, too.
    N: I don`t like radio.
    J: Whats your favorite channel ?
    S: I like Fritz but only when I drive by car.
    J : I often hear Jump. Normally I like radio but there are disadvantages, too. For example... er...
    N : Sometimes you have no reception.
    J : An advantage is that you can take it everywhere.
    N : I dont hear radio but I watch TV.
    S : Whats your favorite channel?
    N : Every Thusday at 8,15 pm I watch « Germanys next Topmodel » Do you have a favorite channel ?
    J : I watch every Friday at 3,00 pm « Laguna Beach » on MTV.
    S : On Monday I watch... On Tuesday oder Thursday I watch... Stefan Raab has introduced a book. Jacky do you read books ?
    J : The book I read last time was the biography of Kelly Trump. In the book she tells you about her childehood and her job. It was the most interesting book I've ever read:
    N: I dont often read books. I dont like them.
    S: You are wrong. I like books and I have some favorite writers.
    J : What are the names of the writers ?
    S: XXX and XXX. Bothe write lovestorys from real life. The name of the last book I have read is named XXX.
    N: The last book I read has the title SHIT. There are young persons who take drugs. But I read often magazines, too.
    S: I also often read the newspaper:

    Ist vielleicht schon einbisschen zu spät, aber::