ENGLISCH HILFE

  • Ich müsste auch mit einem Dialog in die Englischprüfung. Kann sich da auch mal jemand die Grammatik anschauen? Bitte


    W: I had a problem with my computer. The screen was all the time black.
    H: Do you know why?
    W: I hope it is not terrible. But I don’t know.
    M: What did you do?
    W: I send the computer to repair.
    H: Isn`t it expensive?
    J: Mummy pays for me.
    M: I have luck with electrical things. My things get not out of order.
    H: but my things get broken, too.
    W: I have hear that many people can repair a computer self.
    M: My things are great but a friend built his computer self. It is realy crazy. I don`t would know what is what.
    H: I have things there are all right, f.e. my mobile phone. I have no problems with it.
    W: A mobilephone is indispensable. I can call people in each situation.
    H: it is also one of my most important devices. I need my mobilephone.
    M: It is great.
    H: I telephone, but at most I write SMS. Those are not expensive.
    M: If I get a SMS I get totally happy.
    H: Why this?
    M: I know somebody is thinking about me.
    W: As cute.
    H: My TV is also totally important for me. I like movies, but I hate news. I am not interested in this, my parents want that I watch this or I can not watch my movie.
    M: Yes! I love my TV, too. I don`t should watch often. The programme fights my borderom.
    H: The TV is also totally important for me.
    W: When the channels are empty I watched MTV or Via there are a lot of things I am interested in.
    M: Yes that’s right. I like music.
    H: In this “empty channel situation” I watch RTL-Shop. That’s so funny, there are a lot of things who nobody needs.
    W: I need my stereo no longer, because I have my MP3-Player.
    H: me would be boring, too without my MP3-Player.
    M: I need my computer to play or work.
    W: I thanks someone who has invent the computer.
    H: and I thank someone who has invented the lamp.
    M: Or the clock
    H: ore the microwave
    W: Stephen Hawking has also a special computer. He can not move himself, because he has an illness
    H: Who distroit his muscels. This is horrible. I mean he is a famos writer, but I would like to move.
    W: The computer has helped him to write a book f.e. “A Brief History of Time” more than 8mill people bought this book.
    M: A programmer manufact this computer. Walt Waltoz from Florida.
    H: S.H. selects with a switch the words he need. Then he can built sentences. This he sends to a speachsyntesieser, wich express the words loud. Hawking would like to hear a voice with a british accent. W: In the computer are about 2500 words.
    M: S.H. was born in Engl: 1942
    H: he has studied physics in Oxford and Camebrige. Whit 21 years he get ill.
    M: he has two childs and a woman who help him so much.
    W: normal humans need no computer like this.
    H: normal humans need also no alarm system, I have an awake dog.
    W: I belive one need no day care centre.
    H: What is a day care centre?
    M: There you can your children see in the kinder garden.
    W: I need only important things.
    H: What is already important…
    … a day care centre???
    M: a connection between Denmark an Sweden?
    W: That is low tech!
    M: I thing it is so great to create a artificial connect.
    H: It is not good for the sealife.
    M: Yes
    H: Or criminals have more chances
    W: Europe grows together. This is important. The connections countains a tunnel and a brige.
    H: How long is the tunnel?
    W: 4 km
    H: and how high?
    W: about 2,5 m. these tunnels contains a road, a service tunnel and a railway
    H: how long is the brige?
    M: 7,8 km long and the brige has two levels. One for cars and one for trains.
    W: I think I am a master of technologie, because I need my computer, but not every hour.
    H: I am a master of technologie, too. Because when I work with my computer I normaly know what I do and I am not a freak like someone else.
    M: Yes that’s right I am a master too

  • W: I had a problem with my computer. The screen was black all the time.
    H: Do you know, why?
    W: I hope it is not too bad. But I don’t know.
    M: What did you do?
    W: I send the computer for repair.
    H: Isn`t that expensive?
    J: My Mom pays for me.
    M: I have luck with electrical things. They get never broken.
    H: But my things get broken.
    W: I have heared that many people can repair a computer themselves.
    M: My things are ok but a friend has built his computer himself. It is really crazy. I wouldn't know what is what.
    H: I have things there are all right, e. g. my mobile phone. I have no problems with it.
    W: A mobilephone is indispensable. I can call people in each situation.
    H: It is one of my most important devices, too. I need my mobilephone.
    M: That's great.
    H: I call people, but mainly I write SMS. Those are not expensive.
    M: When I get a SMS I'm totally happy.
    H: Why this?
    M: Then I know that somebody is thinking about me.
    W: That's cute.
    H: My TV is also very important for me. I like movies, but I hate news. I am not interested in this, my parents want me to watch them, otherwise I can't watch my movie.
    M: Yes! I love my TV, too. I shouldn't watch it so often, but the programme fights my borderom.
    H: The TV is also totally important for me.
    W: When the channels are empty - ? - I watch MTV or Viva - there are a lot of things I am interested in.
    M: Yes that’s right. I like music.
    H: In this “empty channel situation” I watch RTL-Shop. That’s so funny, there are a lot of things which nobody needs.

    Bis hierhin.
    Dein Englisch ist nicht wirklich gut. Das sind viele offensichtliche Fehler drin.

  • Einpaar Anmerkungen:

    W: I had a problem with my computer. The screen was black all the time.
    H: Do you know, why?
    W: I hope it is not too bad. But I don’t know.
    M: What did you do?
    W: I sent the computer for repair. <---
    H: Isn`t that expensive?
    J: My Mom (is paying or will pay) pays for me. <---
    M: I have luck with electrical things. They get never broken. (I have had luck with my electronic devises. They have never broken down so far)
    H: But my things get broken. (da müsste man wissen was der deutsche satz ist, ist aber sehr falsch)
    W: I have heared that many people can repair computers themselves. <--
    M: My things are ok but a friend has built his computer himself. It is really crazy. I wouldn't know what is what. (auch falsch, deutsch satz??)
    H: I have things that are all right, e. g. my mobile phone. I have no problems with it. <--
    W: A mobilephone is indispensable. I can call people in each (any) situation.
    H: It is one of my most important devices, too. I need my mobilephone.
    M: That's great.
    H: I call people, but usually I write SMS. Those are not expensive. <--
    M: When I get an SMS I'm totally happy. <--
    H: How so? <---
    M: Because I know that somebody is thinking about me. <--
    W: That's cute.
    H: My TV is also very important for me. I like movies, but I hate news. I am not interested in them, my parents want me to watch them, otherwise I can't watch my movie. <--
    M: Yes! I love my TV, too. I shouldn't watch it so often, but the programm fights my borderom. (auch falsch, bräuchte man wieder den deutschen satz)
    H: The TV is also totally important for me.
    W: When the channels are empty (when there is nothing on) - ? - I watch MTV or Viva - there are a lot of things I am interested in.
    M: Yes that’s right. I like music.
    H: In this “empty channel situation” I watch RTL-Shop. That’s so funny, there are a lot of things which (that) nobody needs.

    Äh,.. ja. will ja nicht gemein sein aber manch Sätze machen einfach keinen Sinn.